Amber Fang 3: Revenge, by Arthur Slade (0:53)
Today we see that an uneven tone can be disorienting, especially on the first page. What I gleaned about the story: Our heroine, a vampire, is on a sunny beach….
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Above Ground, by A.M. Harte (5:50)
Today we see that when the same problem recurs so often that instances start singing to you in mocking tones, it’s time to close the book.
Amber Fang, Book 2: Betrayal, by Arthur Slade (40:00)
Today we see that playing to your protagonist’s strengths can inspire an engaging start. What I gleaned about the story: Vampires are awesome in the cold. And a smart-assed AI…
Amber Fang, by Arthur Slade (40:00)
Today brings us another winner! This time it’s a spunky vampire librarian assassin.
The Lust for Blood, by Charmain Marie Mitchell (2:05)
Today we see that even deliberate echoing can be distracting if the surrounding prose doesn’t support the effect.