Tag Archives: thriller

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Stories From Social Media, by Ray Daley (0:55)

Today we see that readers reaching the end of your story isn’t a victory if they leave feeling cheated. What I gleaned about the stories: However train tracks are arranged,…

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Short Stories Found Online, by Jonathan Day (1:31)

Today we see that if you fail to show your intermediate steps, readers will judge you like a teacher going through a divorce. What I gleaned about the stories: While…

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Deadline, by Keith B Walters (1:18)

Today we see that some kinds of errors can convince readers that your book is haunted. But not in a good way. What I gleaned about the stories: People who…

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Short Stories Part 1., by L.L. Caulton (1:16)

Today we see that issues common to one point-of-view are equally distracting when they occur in others. What I gleaned about the stories: Postmen, alarm clocks, and other normal trappings…

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Criminalities: Three Short Crime Stories and an Essay, by Barry Ergang (1:42)

Today we see that if reading your first sentence feels like being nailed by a truck load of nine irons, readers might take a powder on the rest. What I…