A Dodge, A Twist, and a Tobacconist, by Sophronia Belle Lyon (24:17)
Today we see that readers want time to anticipate big scenes before they happen, and then to savor them afterward.
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Before the Chase by Dara Fogel (14:51)
Today we discover that where you explain your world can be more important than how focused you are when you do it. What I gleaned about the stories: Two mystical…
Dark & Day, by Israel Grey (13:56)
Today we see another very promising story hamstrung by the editing.
Sand and Blood, by D. Moonfire (31:01)
Today a good story is eventually worn down by the accumulated abrasions of many tiny grits.
Farsprocket, by Dustin McGee (10:00)
Today we see that small problems can become big problems when they happen in clusters.
