Tag Archives: steampunk

A Dodge, A Twist, and a Tobacconist, by Sophronia Belle Lyon (24:17)

Today we see that readers want time to anticipate big scenes before they happen, and then to savor them afterward.

Before the Chase by Dara Fogel (14:51)

Today we discover that where you explain your world can be more important than how focused you are when you do it. What I gleaned about the stories: Two mystical…

Dark & Day, by Israel Grey (13:56)

Today we see another very promising story hamstrung by the editing.

Sand and Blood, by D. Moonfire (31:01)

Today a good story is eventually worn down by the accumulated abrasions of many tiny grits.

Farsprocket, by Dustin McGee (10:00)

Today we see that small problems can become big problems when they happen in clusters.