Hitler Out Of Time, by David Avoura King (1:43)
Today we see a fun premise brought down by distracting prose.
Today we see a fun premise brought down by distracting prose.
Today we are reminded that narration needs to subtly manage the reader’s attention, without being seen to do so.
Today we are reminded that authors should never tell the reader how brilliant the hero is. It’s like telling coworkers how beautiful your baby is. Show proof or it ain’t so.