The Emperor’s Daughter, by Richard Flunker (3:02)
Today’s book shows us that some writers are completely deaf to echoing.
Tag Archives: military
Final Duty, by Kyle Pratt (6:50)
Today we discover that writing hard sci-fi doesn’t let you use complex words and exposition without consequence. What I gleaned about the stories: Soldiers are either brooding on the past…
Warrior’s Scar, by Shawn Jones (13:03)
Today we see that the numbers in your story have to add up.
Sector 64: Ambush, by Dean M. Cole (31:36)
Today we see that echoing sentence structures can distract just as much as headwords.
Ultimate Duty, by Marva Dasef (19:45)
A good example of how “Show don’t tell” doesn’t mean what you think it means, and its implications for achieving immersion.
