Siege of Praetar, by David Kristoph (21:02)
Today we see that some stories may be stronger than their editorial execution.
Today we see that some stories may be stronger than their editorial execution.
Today we see that echoes do not need to be at the starts of sentences or paragraphs to cause problems.
Today we get a doubly rare treat: another survivor, and this one has a female lead.
Today we see that if not even the author can keep the details straight, the reader hasn’t got a chance.
Today we discover that while giving the reader a detailed enough picture of the scene is necessary, it needs emotional resonance. What I gleaned about the stories: Knowing your enemy…