Human Again, by Moran Chaim (3:08)
Today we see that it is possible to have nuanced prose where all the nuances are wrong.
Today we see that it is possible to have nuanced prose where all the nuances are wrong.
Today we see that another way to grab readers is not with action, but with the imminent expectation of action.
Today we see a great premise weakened by a bit of sloppy spelling.
Today we are reminded that narration needs to subtly manage the reader’s attention, without being seen to do so.
Today I am reminded that the more promising the story, the more of a betrayal weak editing seems to be.