Tag Archives: magic

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The Mundane Collective, by TB Löklund (9:32)

Today we see that promising characters and conflicts sometimes struggle to be seen behind cluttered prose.

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A Threat of Shadows, by JA Andrews (13:26)

Today we see that fantasy capitalization syndrome can ruin a good story.

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White Rabbit Society, by Brendan Detzner (3:59)

Today we see an intriguing story set in a magical house derailed by distracting and unintended patterns in the prose.

The Seal of Throkar, by Marniy Jones (6:43)

Today we see that subtle word misuse can create unintended comical effects that break immersion.

Mage Slave, by R.K. Thorne (3:50)

Today we see that pronouns are like pit-bulls.