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The Weatherman, by Laurie Axinn Gienapp (10:14)

Today we see that even if you’re trying to create a bit of mystery, some details need to be clearly established up front.

Patchwork Man, by D.B. Martin (40:00)

Today we see that no matter how humble, any character’s life can be presented in captivating fashion.

Nano Contestant, by Leif Sterling (2:47)

Today we see that unusual chapter breaks can throw readers off their stride.

Mind Me Milady, by Hicks and Rothman-Hicks (12:05)

Today I learned that if your exposition changes the focus of the scene, that’s when it officially becomes “conspicuous.”