Tag Archives: horror

Asylum – 13 Tales of Terror by Matt Drabble (1:11)

Today we see that combining two things that damage immersion only damages immersion faster. What I gleaned about the stories: Darkness looms gloomily across melancholy figures as they brood morbidly….

Blood Moon 2, by Cody Toye (2:01)

Today we see that overdoing the adjectives robs a story of emotional detail.

Facets of Fantasy, by Arthur Hall (2:52)

Today we see that a poor conversion from print to ebook can drown out the text completely.

The Uncanny Valley: Tales from a Lost Town, by Gregory Miller (3:46)

Today we see that inconsistent punctuation can be just as jarring as inaccurate punctuation.

The Dark and Shadowy Places, by Caitlin McColl (2:27)

Today we see that poorly balanced clauses both trip the reader and add weight to issues that might otherwise not trip them.