Today we see that combining two things that damage immersion only damages immersion faster. What I gleaned about the stories: Darkness looms gloomily across melancholy figures as they brood morbidly….
Today we see that overdoing the adjectives robs a story of emotional detail.
Today we see that a poor conversion from print to ebook can drown out the text completely.
Today we see that inconsistent punctuation can be just as jarring as inaccurate punctuation.
Today we see that poorly balanced clauses both trip the reader and add weight to issues that might otherwise not trip them.
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