Toby Smart, by Aaron D. Phillips (1:16)
Today we see that punctuation conventions matter, and if you don’t learn them, invented punctuation conventions will have readers racing for the hills.
Tag Archives: fiction
Broken People, by Ioana Visan (3:24)
Today we see that if your silhouettes have neither backlighting nor total shadow, you might not understand the word “silhouette.” Note: I don’t normally look at marketing materials for a book…
Into Autumn, by Larry Landgraf (2:40)
On very rare occasions, a book will defy common publishing practices for brilliant effect. This is not one of those rare occasions.
Project Fifteen: Rain of Ash, by Rachel Judd (4:52)
Today we see that even small editorial issues can bring you to halt if they happen often enough. Even if the story seems compelling.
Grenheim’s Thorn, by Clay Lewisson (2:26)
Today we see that when three or more characters are in a scene, some kind of establishing shot helps to keep confusion at bay.