Metal Chest, by Chris Yee (4:27)
Today we see that smooth and interesting prose isn’t enough. The narration also has to suit the tone and character of the narrator. What I gleaned about the story: Silas…
Today we see that smooth and interesting prose isn’t enough. The narration also has to suit the tone and character of the narrator. What I gleaned about the story: Silas…
Today we see that it’s important to establish your narrator’s perspective early on, or risk leaving the reader feeling like the rules suddenly changed. What I gleaned about the story:…
Today we see that even evil conspirators need proper motivations for their evil conspiring. What I gleaned about the story: Dr. Reshenko is at a meeting with the most important,…
Today we see that an intriguing premise can blunt the impact of technical problems. We also see that Bryce has a squeamish tummy.
Today we see that a writing style that draws attention to itself can be a double-edged chainsaw.