Tag Archives: aliens

Quantum Tangle, by Chris Reher (31:23)

Today we see a great story summarily executed by Chekhov’s gun.

Tresspassers, by Todd and Tim Wynn (10:00)

If none of your characters feel anything about the events unfolding around them, neither will your readers.

The Mayonnaise Murders, by Keith A. Owens (7:04)

Today we see that alphabet fatigue can disorient readers quickly.

Sector 64: Ambush, by Dean M. Cole (31:36)

Today we see that echoing sentence structures can distract just as much as headwords.

Tiem Mechine, by Alex Hansen (24:11)

Today we see that a rough patch can come at you like a bridge abutment out of the fog.