Category Archives: Immerse Or Die

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Download Initializing, by Adam Myhr (9:19)

Today we see that a little professional editing goes a long way. What I gleaned about the story: Petra—backed up by her remote partner in crime, Fritz—is on site at…

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A Conspiracy of Shadows, by Randy Nargi (8:43)

Today we see a fascinating hiccup in the ImmerseOrDie system. Note from Jefferson: Due to a scheduling mix-up, this book ended up being reviewed twice—once by myself and once by…

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My Short Story Collection, by Barry Lee Jones (0:42)

Today we see that if you tell readers the story situation is boring, they just might believe you. What I gleaned about the stories: Radical change most often occurs as…

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Deadline, by Keith B Walters (1:18)

Today we see that some kinds of errors can convince readers that your book is haunted. But not in a good way. What I gleaned about the stories: People who…

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Amber Fang, Book 2: Betrayal, by Arthur Slade (40:00)

Today we see that playing to your protagonist’s strengths can inspire an engaging start. What I gleaned about the story: Vampires are awesome in the cold. And a smart-assed AI…