Maladaptation, by Adan Ramie (40:00)
Today we see that, when you’re writing in tight POV, any description of a thing is also a description of the character doing the describing. What I gleaned about the…
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Above Ground, by A.M. Harte (5:50)
Today we see that when the same problem recurs so often that instances start singing to you in mocking tones, it’s time to close the book.
Stories From Social Media, by Ray Daley (0:55)
Today we see that readers reaching the end of your story isn’t a victory if they leave feeling cheated. What I gleaned about the stories: However train tracks are arranged,…
Thief’s Blade, by C. Greenwood (7:06)
Today we see that sometimes the problem is not with the prose: it’s with the heading used to label it.
Short Stories Found Online, by Jonathan Day (1:31)
Today we see that if you fail to show your intermediate steps, readers will judge you like a teacher going through a divorce. What I gleaned about the stories: While…