Category Archives: Immerse Or Die

Iron Pen Anthology, by Multiple Authors

Today I take another stab at an anthology, and I think a new policy might be in order. What I gleaned about the first story: A cocky gambler has fabulous luck,…

Justice in an Age of Metal and Men, by Anthony Eichenlaub (17:17)

Today’s read illustrates the immersive peril of an author-puppet protagonist.

A Touch of Magic, by Gregory Mahan (11:11)

An over-familiar opening got me started on a grumpy stride.

Sleepwalker, by Brandy Moss (9:37)

An interesting setup, but harpooned by a consistent grammatical flaw.

Lacuna, by David Adams (24:27)

Good writing brought down by a string of unlikely coincidences.