Category Archives: Immerse Or Die

A Touch of Magic, by Gregory Mahan (11:11)

An over-familiar opening got me started on a grumpy stride.

Sleepwalker, by Brandy Moss (9:37)

An interesting setup, but harpooned by a consistent grammatical flaw.

Lacuna, by David Adams (24:27)

Good writing brought down by a string of unlikely coincidences.

All Is Silence, by Robert L. Slater (24:39)

Today I learned how sensitive I am to compounded implausibilities.