Immortal, by Gene Doucette (40:00)
Today we see that, even when treading familiar ground, a good author can make it seem fresh by adding just a dollop of humor. What I gleaned about the story:…
Category Archives: Immerse Or Die
The Jewels of ImmerseOrDie
You asked for it, so now it’s happening. A curated page of the very best indie fiction, as selected by the grueling ImmerseOrDie review process. These books are the best…
Survival in the Robot Dawn, by C.W. Crowe (6:46)
Today we see that a prologue involving the same cast, setting, and time period as the rest of the story isn’t really a prologue. It’s Scene #1. What I gleaned…
Metal Chest, by Chris Yee (4:27)
Today we see that smooth and interesting prose isn’t enough. The narration also has to suit the tone and character of the narrator. What I gleaned about the story: Silas…
Need your feedback
I posted this the other day, but buried it at the end of a longer note, and now I’m realizing that many readers probably skipped that post. So if you’ve…
