Category Archives: Immerse Or Die Contender

Skeletal, by Katherine Hayton (27:41)

Today we see that when repeated word patterns are persistent, immersion is impossible once you’ve noticed them.

After: The Shock, by Scott Nicholson (38:03)

Today we see that even with the goal-posts looming in sight, a short clump of awkwardness can still trip a reader up before they get there.

Quantum Tangle, by Chris Reher (31:23)

Today we see a great story summarily executed by Chekhov’s gun.

Sector 64: Ambush, by Dean M. Cole (31:36)

Today we see that echoing sentence structures can distract just as much as headwords.

Thea of Oz, by Rebecca A. Demarest (34:59)

Today we see that working in established worlds can be tricky.