Skeletal, by Katherine Hayton (27:41)
Today we see that when repeated word patterns are persistent, immersion is impossible once you’ve noticed them.
Category Archives: Immerse Or Die Contender
After: The Shock, by Scott Nicholson (38:03)
Today we see that even with the goal-posts looming in sight, a short clump of awkwardness can still trip a reader up before they get there.
Quantum Tangle, by Chris Reher (31:23)
Today we see a great story summarily executed by Chekhov’s gun.
Sector 64: Ambush, by Dean M. Cole (31:36)
Today we see that echoing sentence structures can distract just as much as headwords.
Thea of Oz, by Rebecca A. Demarest (34:59)
Today we see that working in established worlds can be tricky.
