IOD-TV Episode #5: Squeaky Wheel Syndrome

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Not all immersion busters are actually errors. Sometimes, perfectly sensible prose can backfire.

Any clean text can annoy readers if it recurs frequently enough, or conspicuously enough.¬†Your editor might not catch these issues, but there’s one group who probably will, and they may even have been trying to get your attention about it.

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About the author

Jefferson Smith is a Canadian fantasy author, as well as the founder, chief editor and resident proctologist of ImmerseOrDie. With a PhD in Computer Science and Creativity Systems compounded by a life spent exploring most art forms for fun and profit, he is underqualified in just about everything. That's why he writes.