Tag Archives: magic

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Made in the Image of the Goddess, by Chantelle Griffin (2:41)

Today we see that low-level grammar and punctuation errors can kick the reader out of a story before it even starts.

A Threat of Shadows, by JA Andrews (A minority report)

Today we see that not all readers respond the same way to a given story.

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The Mundane Collective, by TB Löklund (9:32)

Today we see that promising characters and conflicts sometimes struggle to be seen behind cluttered prose.

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A Threat of Shadows, by JA Andrews (13:26)

Today we see that fantasy capitalization syndrome can ruin a good story.

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White Rabbit Society, by Brendan Detzner (3:59)

Today we see an intriguing story set in a magical house derailed by distracting and unintended patterns in the prose.