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Broken Wizards, by Jeffrey Bardwell (4:55)

Today we see that inadequate editing is the fastest way to derail the immersion train. What I gleaned about the story: A youth who looks like the magistrate’s son is…

Pilgrim of the Storm, by Russ Linton (40:00)

Today we see that the more alien the scenario, the more time it takes to orient the reader.