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Articles, Commentary, and Reflections on the IOD Review Series

  • The 5 Most Common Writing Mistakes That Break Reader Immersion Today marks the publication of the 50th review in my ImmerseOrDie indie book review series. This article today is a reflection on the first 50 such reviews, and a synthesis of A) whether or not I’ve been consistent in my evaluations, and B) trends I’m seeing in the causes of those immersion breaks.