Category Archives: Immerse Or Die

The Curse of Memories, by V. Griffen (26:26)

As a curious counterpoint to yesterday’s lesson, today we learn that a good story can be damaged by weak editing.

The Secret of Stonehenge, by Yury Nikitin (6:24)

Today’s candidate teaches me that even grammatically correct and properly punctuated books with (presumably) a passable story can fail to engage a reader. Your sentence construction, word choices, and camera work matter.

Chrono Virus, by Aaron Crocco (31:08)

In today’s installment, we learn that even little details matter, and that story facts have to be both plausible and internally consistent.