Category Archives: Immerse Or Die

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Made in the Image of the Goddess, by Chantelle Griffin (2:41)

Today we see that low-level grammar and punctuation errors can kick the reader out of a story before it even starts.

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She Dreams of Lonely Stars, by LW Patricks (1:37)

Today we learn that some readers actually read your legal page, and they find mistakes there to┬ábe just as disturbing as anywhere else in your book. What I gleaned about…

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Dark Matter: Short Stories and Poems, by Rose Perez (1:46)

Today we see that┬ástories without emotional content are clad in immersion-proof armor. What I gleaned about the stories: Some ghosts are so lacking in dramatic back-story that they become less…

Millersville, by Brendan Detzner (1:57)

Today we see that proper manuscript editing is not optional.

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Darkin: A History of Blade and Light, by Joseph A. Turkot (1:23)

Today we see that readers expect prose style to be consistent.