Category Archives: Immerse Or Die

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The Eagle’s Flight, by Daniel E. Olesen (26:57)

Today we see that good prose needs an assist from narrative action.

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8 Short Stories, by Floyd Looney (1:30)

Today we see that shifting between temporal tenses is fraught with peril and must be done with care.

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Clutch: Book One of The Wrecked Earth, by CEL Welsh (5:14)

Today we see that opting for a “big-picture history” prologue is like attempting a triple-lutz in figure skating: sure, there are people who make it look easy, but the risk…

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Colossus, by Jette Harris (6:26)

Today we see that one disruption of immersion can be the cause of more disruptions later.

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From a Foreign Shore, by Andrew Knighton (40:00)

Today we see that a single change to the existing world can often capture a reader’s interest better than changing many things.