Category Archives: Immerse Or Die

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Dark Matter: Short Stories and Poems, by Rose Perez (1:46)

Today we see that stories without emotional content are clad in immersion-proof armor. What I gleaned about the stories: Some ghosts are so lacking in dramatic back-story that they become less…

Millersville, by Brendan Detzner (1:57)

Today we see that proper manuscript editing is not optional.

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Darkin: A History of Blade and Light, by Joseph A. Turkot (1:23)

Today we see that readers expect prose style to be consistent.

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Teeth of the Gods, by Sarah L. Wilson (6:53)

Today we examine one of the recipes for melodrama.

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Resistance (Divided Elements #1), by Mikhaeyla Kopievsky (7:39)

Today we see that a writing style that draws attention to itself can be a double-edged chainsaw.