Category Archives: Immerse Or Die

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Everblossom: A Short Story and Poetry Anthology, by Larissa Hinton (2:37)

Today we see that the road to pronouns must be paved with concrete. What I gleaned about the stories: When a face gets slapped, it’s a grim sight whether it’s…

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Rise of the Overlord, by Kevin Potter (3:26)

Today we see that when the conditions of a prophecy are completely under the characters’ control, it’s hard to be impressed when the prophecy is fulfilled. What I gleaned about…

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Short Stories: Volume 1, by Liam Mor (1:10)

Today we see that if your formatting makes reading the page feel like wading through a swamp, readers might give up and head to shore. What I gleaned about the…

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Kissed by Literature, by Jordan Elizabeth (40:00)

Today’s survivor shows us that the best twist endings come as a surprise AND are still consistent with the evidence shown. What I gleaned about the stories: Children, lacking experience…

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God and the Saber-Toothed Tiger and other stories, by Ed Weiss (1:21)

Today we see that readers are looking for your stories; not your “awesome guy achievement awards.” What I gleaned about the stories: If you’re in a queue to pay, you…