Category Archives: Immerse Or Die

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Thief’s Blade, by C. Greenwood (7:06)

Today we see that sometimes the problem is not with the prose: it’s with the heading used to label it.

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Short Stories Found Online, by Jonathan Day (1:31)

Today we see that if you fail to show your intermediate steps, readers will judge you like a teacher going through a divorce. What I gleaned about the stories: While…

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Download Initializing, by Adam Myhr (9:19)

Today we see that a little professional editing goes a long way. What I gleaned about the story: Petra—backed up by her remote partner in crime, Fritz—is on site at…

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A Conspiracy of Shadows, by Randy Nargi (8:43)

Today we see a fascinating hiccup in the ImmerseOrDie system. Note from Jefferson: Due to a scheduling mix-up, this book ended up being reviewed twice—once by myself and once by…

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My Short Story Collection, by Barry Lee Jones (0:42)

Today we see that if you tell readers the story situation is boring, they just might believe you. What I gleaned about the stories: Radical change most often occurs as…