Category Archives: Immerse Or Die Survivor

Maladaptation, by Adan Ramie (40:00)

Today we see that, when you’re writing in tight POV, any description of a thing is also a description of the character doing the describing. What I gleaned about the…

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Amber Fang, Book 2: Betrayal, by Arthur Slade (40:00)

Today we see that playing to your protagonist’s strengths can inspire an engaging start. What I gleaned about the story: Vampires are awesome in the cold. And a smart-assed AI…

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Who Likes Short Shorts? by Peter Sortwell (40:00)

Today we see that deft writing can overcome a few distracting glitches. What I gleaned about the stories: If you want to commit suicide without dying, plan your approach in…

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Angels in the Moonlight, by Caimh McDonnell (40:00)

Today we see that humor and danger make a good team. What I gleaned about the story: Bunny and Gringo are partners in crimefighting, two Irish policemen who make an…

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Kissed by Literature, by Jordan Elizabeth (40:00)

Today’s survivor shows us that the best twist endings come as a surprise AND are still consistent with the evidence shown. What I gleaned about the stories: Children, lacking experience…