What I gleaned about the stories: Some days, you just can’t get rid of a statue.
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Note: This is a short story collection, so the rules are slightly different from standard Immerse or Die: instead of reading on every time I lose immersion, I stop reading that story and move onto the next one. As usual, I stop reading after the third WTF.
Analysis: Part way through a Viking tale, Odin was referred to as all father rather than All Father. My instinctive parsing when I hit it was that all was the beginning of a group, so hitting father next muddled me. This slowed me enough for my mind to question whether, if the author had failed to capitalise a proper noun, whether other errors had slipped through.
After pondering for a moment whether or not this error was more serious in a collection aimed primarily at historical fiction readers, I moved on.
Analysis: Each of the stories had a good balance of in-time tone and timeless concerns, so felt like an unique narrative fully embedded in the period without being a struggle to understand or empathise with.
Analysis: Those stories that sat more at the science-fiction/fantasy end of the “realism” scale were marked by a single change well-explored rather than lots of changes. In addition to making it easy to find my footing in the world, this avoided the sense of jumping from one thing to another that some short stories can suffer from.
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